So i'm following the intro to java 6.092 course @ mit ocw. I'm on lesson two, but nothing I try seems to make the program work right.
i even noticed that the version of my code provided in the lesson 2 review at the beginning of lesson 3 has a similar problem. [edit]- the code from the lesson was incomplete cause i forgot to add a variable.
An employee gets paid (hours worked) × (base pay), for each hour up to 40 hours.
For every hour over 40, they get overtime = (base pay) × 1.5. The base pay must not be less than the minimum wage ($8.00 an hour). If it is, print an error. If the number of hours is greater than 60, print an error message.
Here is my try for a solution:
public static void main(String[] arguments) {
int startOT = 40;
int maxH = 60;
double otPay = 1.5;
int emp1Hours = 35, emp2Hours = 47, emp3Hours = 73;
double emp1Pay = 7.50, emp2Pay = 8.20, emp3Pay = 10.00;
double swer;
if (emp1Hours > startOT){
swer = emp1Pay * startOT + (emp1Pay * otPay) * (emp1Hours - startOT);
System.out.println("Employee John Doe makes " + "$" + swer + " this week!");
}else if (emp1Hours > maxH){
System.out.println("@John Doe ERROR! Hours worked is invalid!");
}
else if (emp1Pay < 8){
System.out.println("Invalid hourly pay ;(");
}
else {
swer = emp1Pay * emp1Hours;
System.out.println("Employee John Doe makes " + "$" + swer + " this week!");
}
double swerzie;
if (emp2Hours > startOT){
swerzie = emp2Pay * startOT + (emp2Pay * otPay) * (emp2Hours - startOT);
System.out.println("Employee Jane Doe makes " + "$" + swerzie + " this week!");
}else if (emp2Hours > maxH){
System.out开发者_StackOverflow社区.println("@Jane Doe ERROR! Hours worked is invalid!");
}
else if (emp2Pay < 8){
System.out.println("Invalid hourly pay ;(");
}
else {
swerzie = emp2Pay * emp2Hours;
System.out.println("Employee Jane Doe makes " + "$" + swerzie + " this week!");
}
double answer;
if (emp3Hours > startOT){
answer = emp3Pay * startOT + (emp3Pay * otPay) * (emp3Hours - startOT);
System.out.println("Employee malcom smith makes " + "$" + answer + " this week!");
}else if (emp3Hours == 73){
System.out.println("@malcom smith ERROR! Hours worked is invalid!");
}
else if (emp3Pay < 8){
System.out.println("Invalid hourly pay ;("); }
else {
answer = emp3Pay * emp3Hours;
System.out.println("Employee malcom smith makes " + "$" + answer + " this week!");
}
}
And here's the output of the program:
-Invalid hourly pay ;( -Employee Jane Doe makes $414.1 this week! -Employee malcom smith makes $895.0 this week!
See, your code duplicates (triplicates) all logic and calculations This is, erm, suboptimal.
Imagine a procedure that takes hours_worked
and base_pay
as parameters and prints either the sum earned or a error message. Then apply it three times to three different employees.
Something along the lines of this:
from java.math import BigDecimal; // money is never float or double.
public static void calculateWage(String name, BigDecimal hourly_rate, int hours) {
final int OVERTIME_THRESHOLD = 40;
final int HOURS_LIMIT = 60;
final BigDecimal MIN_HOURLY_RATE = new BigDecimal("8.00");
// ^^^ again, never store money in a floating point form!
if (hours > HOURS_LIMIT) {
// what do you do?
}
if (hourly_rate.compareTo(MIN_HOURLY_RATE) < 0) { // less than
// what do you do?
// now think how to merge it with previous
}
if (hours > OVERTIME_THRESHOLD) {
int overtime = hours - OVERTIME_THRESHOLD;
// calculate two values and sum them up
}
else { // no overtime
// calculate just one value
}
}
public static void main(String[] args) {
calculateWage("John", new BigDecimal("7.50"), 73);
calculateWage("Jane", /* well, you see*/);
}
Isn't this code a bit more readable and neat? Yours can be, too.
The first part of the code looks fine:
double emp1Pay = 7.50,...
...
if (emp1Hours > startOT){
...
else if (emp1Pay < 8){ System.out.println("Invalid hourly pay ;("); }
This prints out exactly what you'd expect if emp1Pay is <8:
"Invalid hourly pay ;(".
SUGGESTIONS:
1) Step through the code a line at a time under the Eclipse debugger. Follow what's happening - and why.
2) Consider "spreading out your code" a bit.
I hope your course examples don't use that coding style - bunching everything together makes it really hard to read. I can only imagine how difficult it must be for a beginner.
Here's a much better example of coding style:
http://java.sun.com/docs/codeconv/html/CodeConventions.doc3.html
3) Consider breaking your logic into a separate method. Instead of duplicating the code (once for each value), just call your new method three times (with three different sets of arguments - but just one block of code).
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